Saturday, March 12, 2011

What would a sister say?

What would a sister say?

Juggling random feelings in my head a sense of loneliness, despair, and contemplations
Feelings that I know, is meant to lay burdens and doubt onto my heart.
What would a sister say?
Wondering curiously thinking about how to tell a beautiful sister positive affirmations.
Saying “Do not worry, You are a beautiful women.” slightly turning my head, creating a soft breeze against my skin.
What would a sister say?
Waiting quietly settling down waiting for a great Comforter to rest their hands on me.
Smiling saying to the beautiful sister, everything is well.
Slowly lifting her chin.
What would a sister say?
Thinking I might have said what a true sister will say.


PS. Will be Vivienne soon


Anonymous said...

I don't know whether I understand this. Is it written as if you were talking to your real sister? If not, who is "a sister?" I love the softness of the feelings excpressed here, as well as how gentle they seem, but I'm just a little confused about the meaning.

Anne said...

This is beautiful, and if you said these things to your sister, she's lucky to have you. If one of my brothers ever sent this to me in the mail, I'd cherish it forever. It says "I love you" without saying it.
You write so beautifully!

Vivianne Summers said...

At some point, I will rewrite the Poem because its a little confusing.